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Trent Lythgoe's avatar

Four things I love about this article:

Max gives us the thesis immediately, in plain language. We don’t have to hunt for or guess at the main point.

This one-sentence paragraph: “Sometimes, the audience isn’t even born yet.” Although it could fit in the next paragraph, setting it apart makes us pause—as if Max asked, “Have you thought about that?” without writing the words.

He breaks the rules with intention: “Because great writing is often uncomfortably honest.” Yes, it’s a dependent clause, but it works. It sounds conversational, like something he’d say aloud. Clear and conversational beats technical correctness.

The conclusion: “In essence, he was describing the power of discourse.” A one-sentence conclusion might feel incomplete or gimmicky in a weaker article. Here it works because it echoes the introduction—matching in length (one sentence) and language (key word: discourse).

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Barrett F. Lowe's avatar

Excellent article. For Gary and the rest of the Hardos, you can go to the Army University Press site to get to the archvies for Military Review. Before 2005, the issues are archvies at the Ike Skelton Libreary at Ft. Leavenworth. Link to the July 1990 issue with (then) MAJ Dan Bolger's article above is at: https://cgsc.contentdm.oclc.org/digital/collection/p124201coll1/id/538/rec/10

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