Writers face rejection. The best rejections are prompt, recommend an alternative venue, and explain how you might improve your work. Most rejections are just that: a no. Other times you won’t even get rejected, just ghosted by editors.
Despite publishing many articles, I have not found the end of rejection. For me, writing, even technical or professional writing, can be intensely personal. After refining my thoughts though writing, it can be hard to tell where I end and the piece begins. This makes rejection feel personal.
Remember: rejection isn’t personal.
As I’m rejected, I remember my worth and seek alternate publication venues. Sometimes good ideas languish for years or only live on in your Google Drive.
Below, I've listed some recent rejections that I could remember. Each has the date that the project started, the number of rejections, and a short description of the projects ups and downs.
Recent rejections I remember
Cadet combat divers (one rejection). This 2019 editorial ghosting birthed the Harding Project. Frustrated that I couldn't share the great story about how well West Point cadets do at the Combat Diver Qualification Course, I researched how well Special Warfare met its mission and proposed renewing it to leaders at the Special Warfare Center and School. Ultimately, that search broadened into the Harding Project today.
Army professional writing (one rejection, one publication). “Bring Back Branch Magazines”, the piece that birthed the Harding Project, was initially rejected by War on the Rocks in 2023. I resubmitted to the Modern War Institute, where it had a great response. I first started collecting data for this piece in 2020, so this project has certainly had a long burn.
Combat observers (three rejections, one publication). How should the United States best learn from foreign wars? This project proposes sending military observers to learn lessons as we did in the 19th and early 20th centuries. Drafting started in early 2020 shortly after the Nagorno-Karabakh war started. Parameters first rejected the full piece in 2021. A few months later, War on the Rocks rejected a short version. About a year later, War on the Rocks published a revised version only to have Joint Forces Quarterly reject the full version that I had re-written for their joint audience. I may rewrite the full piece again for Military Review, but I haven’t found the time.
Drinking in Hungary (one rejection). Back when War on the Rocks published more drinking related content, this 2018 piece by Michael Burgoyne and Raul Manaut inspired me to reflect on drinking palinka with Hungarian special operators. War on the Rocks asked that I find a Hungarian co-author, but Hungarian friends abstained for fear of glorifying alcohol. Today, “Five O’Clock in Budapest” lives on in my Google Drive waiting for a Hungarian co-author’s contribution.
Flag officer confirmation special data feature (one rejection). As part of my academic interest in retired flag officer politics, I spent too many hours in 2022 scraping and cleaning flag officer promotions from the Congressional Record. Regrettably, Armed Forces and Society, the only outlet possibly interested in this project, rejected the piece in a split reviewer decision. Part of the project was reborn in this Lawfare article, but the rest of the piece is on ice.
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While I hope that the Army's editors will work with authors, some pieces will be rejected for either a lack of space or editorial capacity.
Tell us about a rejection, how you felt about it, and what you did next.
An important reminder for new(er) authors: even those of us with a long publication record get rejections. This piece (https://nationalinterest.org/feature/can-the-great-america-india-team-survive-past-obama-16852) started at WOTR, but wasn't quite the right fit. The WOTR editor shared it with DefenseOne, which received no response. We then pulled our submission from DefenseOne and sent to The National Interest, where it was published nearly immediately.
A bit of advice on what worked: a) submit a clearly written draft; makes it easier to find the right home if your initial pitch doesn't work; b) be kind and courteous to every editor you work with--they want you to succeed, even if not at their publication; and c) be both patient and persistent.
I wrote a paper on gray zone deterrence while in grad school that I eventually submitted to STRATCOM for an essay contest that I won. Thinking I wrote an awesome paper, I submitted it to a peer reviewed journal to basically learn that I had submitted trash, to include one peer reviewer making a comment about my writing needing a native English edit. Anyways, after 1.5 years of rejection at 6 different journals, I finally figured out how to get the article published:
https://digitalcommons.usf.edu/jss/vol10/iss3/2/